A Distant Love Poem by Crimson Love

A Distant Love

Rating: ★4.9


I'm the angel sent to protect you.
Watching your life through closed eyes,
I watch and observe.
Such a delicate creature of beauty,
My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing,
Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity,
My heart's exploding with the thought of you,
So painful; love hurts,
Watching my hidden desire from a far,
Never together only distanced by love.

Monday, September 19, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 November 2011

Crim, you wana bring tears to other children's eyes? ..this is a great piece of art my fellow poet and many of us can relate to it....WOW!

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Crimson Love 28 October 2011

hehehe I love Alex Manson! =)

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Alex Manson 28 October 2011

i love this, crim! yeah, that's your new nickname...'crim'. :) no but seriously, i'm very inspired by this, it's beautiful, just like you, except you're just plain gorgeous.... XD

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Sonali Sings 20 October 2011

God has His ways of testing love by keeping two apart, making it divine with distance bringing them together in heaven. Simply loved reading.

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Lenore Lee 16 October 2011

This must be a very difficult thing for you, to love but for it to be almost impossible for the two of you to be together. I've been through something similar, wondrous poem.

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Daniel Brick 04 January 2017

An angel sent to protect falls in love. What a complication! But that's what love is - a complication - perhaps sexual expression is a simplication, a reductionof that complication to a point of satisfaction. But in this case that is not possible so the heart and mind are in acute conflict. The mind must agree with the heart eventually or vice versa but the heightened existence this leadsd to is stunning. Loin d'amour is the titlem, of an opera the MET presented thismseason, in other words Love from Afar. Your poem exactly!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 March 2016

My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing, Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity, My heart's exploding with the thought of you, love hurts. we all go through such experiences which make us all mature. thank you. tony

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Allotey Abossey 30 June 2015

Love is a beautiful thing my friend...... Good one there

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ayesha alb 22 April 2015

such an adorable !!

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Ovi Hale 18 July 2012

Passionate, true and plainly wondrous writing. It's a fine piece of art.

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