Little Souls Poem by Soran M. H

Little Souls

Rating: 5.0


For years now,
a black cloud
has hovered
above the farm
of my poetry,
pouring its rain
without end.
Nothing grows there
except little souls—
fragile creatures
struggling
against the weight
of life.
Soon,
they disappear,
forgotten
by readers
who never ask
who wrote
these dark poems,
or why.
They do not lift
their eyes
toward the darkness
of the cloud
drifting from the East,
where a distant voice
seems to whisper:
Make them less dark—
for the sake
of an optimistic horizon,
and the brightness
of day.
But the heavy clouds
continue to rain
upon the farm
of my poems—
without pause,
without mercy.

Little Souls
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2019

Darkness! ! Black clouds up there. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 26 December 2019

but your comment set the light in that darkness, awaiting more from you, thanks

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

Dear Mahtab warmly welcomed generous commentary. cheers I hope all is well with you and those around you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

on the farm of my poems without stop.....beautiful to read this poem Poem not for the dark clouds of heart Poem not for the extravagant ink Poem not for the torrential devastation of love Poem articulates the enlightenment of poets inside.......

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 August 2020

Dark Poetry imbued with wisdom and insight must be read. Lessons culled from it can be applied in our journey of life. Darkness and evilness of humanity must be exposed. This exposure through Poetry serves a warning and guide to attain peace.

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Anjandev Roy 15 September 2020

This is a remarkable piece......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 14 September 2020

But the full clouds still rain on the farm of my poems without stop

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Susan Williams 14 September 2020

You must continue to write those dark poems- -they were meant to be written how they were written and why they were written and when they were written! ! ! ! Life has its own ways to get our attention! ! ! ! And trying to get away from its edicts will cause your readers great loss. 10+++++++

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Soran M. H 13 August 2020

Always your beautiful comments are encouraging me to write better, your views are important to me dear famous poet Rose Marie Juan-austin. have a nice time over there with kind regards

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 August 2020

A beautiful poem full of powerful emotions. " A black cloud has rained on the farm of my Poetry." Wonderful lines from a wonderful poem. 10+++and to my Poem List.

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