In my youth and prime,
I sought gold:
in the breast of the forest,
down its deepest ravines,
on the ocean floor
among its strongest currents.
I sought it in the sky,
where vastness is guarded
by ruinous thunder,
and at the mouth of volcanoes
where intense fire
waited to engulf me.
Yet, I never found gold-
not even a speck.
Still, I tried,
and tried,
and I tried,
until my autumn came.
Then the elusive gold appeared.
I found it everywhere,
in the falling leaves.
They dance with me,
tease me in the gentle wind,
touching my face,
touching my hair,
touching my skin,
until they become
a part of me...
Until...
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I sought it in the sky, Where the vastness is guarded By destructive thunder, And at the mouths of volcanoes, Where blazing fires Lay in wait to swallow me whole.
What a lovely and imaginative poem! ! ! You paint a very grand picture of the splendor of autumn! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful work!
Atlast your frantic search for gold ended with changes in the autumn.Very nice and well thought rubric given.
This is a glorious piece.... enjoyed... thanks for sharing..
I am overwhelmed by this wealth in your own surroundings. Thank you for sharing this precious poem 5 Stars TOP STARS.
TOP Stars for this Gold I have found in your wellknown area, Closest around you, so very precious to watch the Gold in your own Garden wealth.
p1 A beautiful text, distinguished by its poetic merit; it employs metaphor and figurative language rather than a direct, matter-of-fact style. Gold carries multiple connotations here, and the text is cohesive in its structure and thematic unity from start to finish—without,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
p2 however, closing the piece off with a definitive conclusion. An excellent effort; well done to the pioneering poet.462 poems signify 462 experiences and visions of the world through a poetic lens, subsequently reimagined and rendered with rhetorical flair. Well done.