Gold In The Autumn Wind Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Gold In The Autumn Wind

Rating: 5.0

In my youth and prime,
I sought gold:
in the breast of the forest,
down its deepest ravines,
on the ocean floor
among its strongest currents.
I sought it in the sky,
where vastness is guarded
by ruinous thunder,
and at the mouth of volcanoes
where intense fire
waited to engulf me.

Yet, I never found gold-
not even a speck.

Still, I tried,
and tried,
and I tried,
until my autumn came.

Then the elusive gold appeared.
I found it everywhere,
in the falling leaves.
They dance with me,
tease me in the gentle wind,
touching my face,
touching my hair,
touching my skin,

until they become
a part of me...

Until...

Copyright 2026, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 08 September 2026

p2 however, closing the piece off with a definitive conclusion. An excellent effort; well done to the pioneering poet.462 poems signify 462 experiences and visions of the world through a poetic lens, subsequently reimagined and rendered with rhetorical flair. Well done.

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Soran M. H 08 September 2026

I sought it in the sky, Where the vastness is guarded By destructive thunder, And at the mouths of volcanoes, Where blazing fires Lay in wait to swallow me whole.

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Isadora Quagmire 07 September 2026

What a lovely and imaginative poem! ! ! You paint a very grand picture of the splendor of autumn! Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful work!

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Nabakishore Dash 06 September 2026

Atlast your frantic search for gold ended with changes in the autumn.Very nice and well thought rubric given.

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Anjandev Roy 05 September 2026

This is a glorious piece.... enjoyed... thanks for sharing..

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Rob Lamberton 13 September 2026

A golden poem from a treasured poetess with a gold pen!

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Michael Cochrane 12 September 2026

Lovely poem autumn is a beautiful season

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 September 2026

I am overwhelmed by this wealth in your own surroundings. Thank you for sharing this precious poem 5 Stars TOP STARS.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 September 2026

TOP Stars for this Gold I have found in your wellknown area, Closest around you, so very precious to watch the Gold in your own Garden wealth.

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Soran M. H 08 September 2026

p1 A beautiful text, distinguished by its poetic merit; it employs metaphor and figurative language rather than a direct, matter-of-fact style. Gold carries multiple connotations here, and the text is cohesive in its structure and thematic unity from start to finish—without,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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