Drowning Poem by Novice Writer

I liked you the moment I laid my eyes on you.
For who am I to argue, that my heart doesn't belong to you.

Every move that you made.
Every smile that you showed.
Every time that you looked,
Into me, I felt breathless.

My heart beats fast.
But the world slowed down.
I noticed every details.
Even your flaws.

Oh what beautiful flower.
Fragrance drifting along the breeze.

it was worth a mile to take the risk
So I tried and I suceed.
Oh, what is this feeling.
Its not just because of its beauty.
I'm drowning
As time goes by, I fall deeper and deeper in your eyes.