Deep Within Me Poem by Chidori Storm

Deep Within Me

Rating: 4.5


There is a part of me
That I rarely let out,
I only let it out
When I have control of it.

I keep this part of me
Hidden deep inside,
I don’t know its full strength
Nor do I feel it’s safe to find out yet.

It has always been kept deep within me
Until I let some of it out,
I do not try to let it control me
But there are times that it does.

I keep this part of me
That can be very destructive,
And cause so much pain
Deep within my body and soul.

Wednesday, March 3, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crazy Vampire 26 March 2010

can totally relate...i have trouble controling my anger as well... im glad u r trying...

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Crimson Haze 26 March 2010

I have read three poems by you and it seems that this really bothers you. I think it is great that you have leanred to control it even if is only I little bit.

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