Crusted Hands Poem by Chealsey Marou

Crusted Hands

Rating: ★4.4


I am in beneath of the tomb
Crawling at the edge of the slimy enclosure

I can smell the disgusting creature
Who's standing on top of my tombstone

He's the one who dragged me outside the world
Locked me and nailed me

To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands
So that no one will exploit me nor posses me
Because for him I should live for his sight only....

Crusted Hands
Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2019

I can smell the disgusting creature Who's standing on top of my tombstone...... he is the one who dragged me.. imagination with power. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Chealsey Marou. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 April 2019

HE The Great Savior, Locked me and nailed me To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands//////

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Rabbit Ears 17 April 2020

I'll eat you for breakfast.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2020

To make sure that I will no longer escape from his hands So that no one will exploit me nor posses me Because for him I should live for his sight only.... he locked me and nailed me. prison and in darkness. tony

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 April 2020

Poignant write. Great imagery. Loved the way you have expressed your feelings. Congrats.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 April 2020

superb poem penned/ congrats for being selected as POD in the dark sphere of world wind killers are crawling nailing the chaste humanity dying thousands......

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Wonderful imagery and allegory.of a life, freedom denied. Congratulations being POD...10

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The Dark One 17 April 2020

I'm everywhere and nowhere. Inhabiting numerous accounts.

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Chealsey Marou 17 April 2020

I know I inhabit dozens of accounts. So what?

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Chealsey Marou

Chealsey Marou

Olongapo City, Philippines
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