Bloody Rose A Poem Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Bloody Rose A Poem

Rating: 4.7


In gardens of sorrow, a bloodied rose weeps,
Its petals, once vibrant, now stained and torn.
A tale of passion, etched in crimson deep,
Love's beauty tarnished, its essence forlorn.

Once cherished, it bloomed with grace and delight,
A symbol of ardor, devotion delight.
Yet shadows of time cast a somber blight,
Leaving scars of longing, in silence unbound.

Each thorn, a reminder of love's embrace,
The pain and the pleasure entwined, never ceased.
But still, in its frailty, a poignant grace,
The bloodied rose whispers of love's masterpiece.

Through trials and tribulations it arose,
A testament to love's enduring prose.

Sunday, July 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: gardens,longing,rose,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

AND, FINALLY, stanza 4: 'it arose' Is 'it' referring to 'embrace' or 'love'? I wonder. And I think it is 'cute' or at least INTERESTING that you used 'arose' in a poem about 'a blooded 'rose'. ;)

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

**** 'Sadomasochism Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster: the derivation of sexual gratification from the infliction of physical pain or humiliation either on another person or on oneself' : )

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

(cont.) more on stanza 3: James, Do you have some reference to Sadomasochism **** going on here? ? ? I'm JUST asking; I don't ask for details! ! ! ! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

I'LL TRY AGAIN...TO COMMENT (AGAIN) , I THINK, ON stanza 3, especially 'a poignant grace'. I often use the word 'a/A', but RARELY, IF EVER do I use either 'poignant'or 'grace'. The former reminds me of 'ointment' and the later reminds me of an 'old' movie actress/actor. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

I'm SURE I

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 September 2026

Beautiful and meaningful poem, so well said. TOP Stars. To my Favourites.

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

Your work was done, and now MINE is also. : )

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

James, VERY NICE WORK! ! i WAS LEANING TOWARDS 5 STARS, BUT DECIDED ON 4 (****) INSTEAD. If I COULD I'd have given 4 1/2 stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

(cont.) AND 'prose'? Did 'love' use 1 - Ordinary speech or writing, without metrical structure. OR 2 - Commonplace expression or quality.'? ? ? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2023

[I think I 'lost' some of what I'd typed re stanza 4] 'it arose': 'it' refers to either 'love' or 'embace'? ? I find it 'cute' or at least interesting that James used 'arose' [verb] in this poem about 'a bloodied rose'. (cont.)

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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